My letter for future Host Family

Dear Host Family, 
My name is Renata, I’m 19 years old I live with my parents: my father Donizete (53 y.o) Cida (50 y.o) and my little brother Mikhael (9 y.o). We live in Jacareí a small town of São Paulo/ Brazil. We are very united and friends I’m very affectionate so I like to stay near them to make simple things: watch a tv, movies, eat something or just talking.
My routine is very stirred, I start my job at 8am and go out 5:30pm, step in my house, have a dinner and go straight to university that is in another city (São José dos Campos), but is not so far. I’m full scholarship I’m on the third semester of accounting. When it weekend I go to english (I return to English class because I wanna know to talk better with the kids and yours), next I go to Isabella’s house, she is a baby that I care. I stay with her until her mother arrived to the job, sometimes I sleep there because is a another neighborhood and on Sunday I take care her too.
Learned and developed to exchange caring for children, bathe, prepare and present the food, help with the homework, teaching school subjects such as history and math, reading stories, for sleeping and invent games that do not fall into the nice routine ..
Since childhood I’m so delighted for American lifestyle,  how the people are independents, how like to be smarts and entrepreneurial, focused. This is like me, I’m so determined, studious…
When I was small I started to learn keyboard, but I stopped and continued just singing in the church and a band that I rode with 15 years old. I can play two little music’s, but one day I still intend come back to learn.
My home is very small and my parents are going to live on the farm on November, as I will be alone before going to USA I learned to cook, to clean and to wash. I help my mother to prepare the food and when she go out with my father I’m responsible for organizer the kitchen, my room and cook to me.
I like to write, always I can I wrote something, music’s letter’s, texts; Also I like to read a books and to sing, I’ve a habit that put a music’s letters and start to sing alone in my room. I’m not very vain, but I like to keep my hair tidy.  I'm not consuming, but I love walking into stores and buying gifts.
On the weekends, when I’ve time I go out with my friends or watching a movie that I put in my English school. I’ve university class only Monday to Thursday, so Friday I rest, I sleep early…
I love animals, dog, cat, hamster; I’m just afraid snacks and spiders. I haven’t dogs in my house because I live in apartment, but in the farm I’ve two dogs: Melina and Melissa.
I love to ride, but I never was to another country. I ride for my state even, beach, could cities in the winter… I love nature, sea, waterfalls, plants, rivers…
I’m so communicative, I love to tell about my life, read histories and listen too. I love to listen the people’s history life. 
I don’t eat fish and chicken, since childhood I don’t like these flavors, although I like to sin I think this is just a sport. And talking about sport, I wanted to take time for play soccer and make gym every day even if only a little, I love that!
On my free time I study English or raw college, I’m very focused and dedicated and since small I ever liked to study.
I hope to can know many places with you and that learn me a little about your country’s culture. I will so play with kids and I will help my host mother in the kitchen if she wants. I’m very energetic and I’m sure there will be disposition for to do that kids are always in actives and recreational activities that areand they teach good things for them.
I'm very excited for this trip,I have worked hard to get there. Let's have fun and give us very well!
Best Regards,
Renata.

Erros com certeza tem um monte, mas consegui me expressar e procurei palavras, tempos verbais... Ou seja, acabei aprendendo também enquanto estava escrevendo minha cartinha. Primeiro joguei todas as ideias em português e depois traduzi.

Espero que ajude!

Beeeijinhos! (: